Providing fun;causing amusement or laughter;amusing;comical. I'd say that the #1 word that describes me as a friend is funny! Making my friends laugh by saying and doing dumb things is what I like to do, it makes people feel good to be around me. One of the reason I'm funny is because I am outgoing on everything I do. I like to do imitations of people I hate, act out of my way, this makes my friends laugh and it makes people feel comfortable to be around me. A friend who is loud, outgoing, yup that's me! What people have to say about me doesn't bother me at all. As a person i'm not scared to do things, I just go at it and don't twice about doing it. When I am with my friends the dumb exciting girl comes out of me and takes over my body. I would just hate life if we couldn't hear the words of laughter "ha,ha,ha,ha,ha!" Remember,"There is nothing more beautiful then your laughter, except your laugh it made me thank a special friend."
4 comments:
I think that you had a great hook and you also did some great supporting details but I think that you kind of lost me in your conclusion over that it was great
I really like your hook!
I think that you should use speciffic details!
You should also say what you say to your friends so people could understand how you are!
i like your bigging part it was good your middle part was kind of off topic but i like your bigging part
ana maria i liked how u started your friend promp i also like how when u read your friend promp to the group it still needed some work but u took our advise and fixed your story and now it's perfect.
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