Friday, October 2, 2009

Feelings behind the door

The door is locked

Lonely in the dark room

The door is locked

Turn the music up

The door is locked

I grab the razor

The door is locked

I'm trapped with my feelings

The door is locked

Turn the music up

I grab the razor

I think to myself

"Why should I live another day?"

The door is locked

I cry as I move the razor across my risk.

Turn the music up

It overcomes my feelings inside

The door is locked

Blood coming down my wrist

The door is locked

The pain inside is back again

The door is locked

I move the razor across my wrist

The door is locked

I turn the music up

So you wont here me scream

The door is locked...

And the door wont open.

My Baby Sister

"She doesn't have much time with us, I'm sorry to say this but she's going to die." These were the words flowing around the dark, depressed, sad, room October 18,2002. Everyone looked at each other side by side up and down with a sad face that was about to burst out of salty tears. I was there holding her tight where I felt never to let go! I remember her in my arms, she was so tiny and skinny,her skin was reddish,purple, it was undescriptable. She had her blue and white soft,smooth blanket wrapped around her, an also white knit warm hat, and a light blue dog with yellow chickens with blue sailor hat on top of their heads with blue spotted dots with a sky blue ribbon around the dog's neck. When resting in my arms I look into her eyes, I start to shed tears. I look into the future to see my baby sister as an smart, strong independent woman with a loved one by her side and small alike little kids by her, who she cares and loves. When she got taken away from my arms I tried to fight back to keep her with me but I knew I had to turn her in, I gave her a deep smooth kiss, I knew this was a good-bye for good. As I turned her in and spread my arm straight forward to do so, I felt a part of me vanishing away as nothing. All the fun possible things we could have done together were dragged around the world by the wind. In that moment I wanted to be with her I wanted to die with her but I knew that was impossible, life goes on and you just have to live with it and move on but can always stay in you're heart.

"Forever and always in my heart, I love you baby sister!"♥


R.I.P(October 18,2002) Hilda Escalante Venegas

What is this I feel?

I feel butterflies in my stomach


Shivers rushing through my body


My heart is skipping beats


My eyes are glued to him not a movement nor a blink


Wondering what this is am feeling inside of me


He turned


And making contact with me


He knew that our hearts were screaming t...


The passion of love!♥

♥Thinking of you!♥

I can't sleep...



Thinking of you



I can't believe you came up to me and said...



"I love you"



I just wanna hold you tight



And never let go!



I can't stop thinking...



Thinking of you and me



Thinking that you're thinking of me



I can't sleep



I can't stop...



Stop thinking of you...



"I love you too!"♥

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

How To Write A Proficient Paragraph

"Students today we are going to learn how to write a proficient paragraph!"To write a proficient paragraph you will need a hook,transition,topic sentence at least 3 supporting details with examples to each and a conclusion. You will need a hook to catch the readers attention, it will interest your readers to read your piece. Your transition will help you lead to your topic sentence.The topic sentence is needed to know what you are writing about and to state your details. After the topic sentence you will need supporting details, they will support/help your main topic. Then you will need examples that will support each detail and give more understanding of that detail. Make your details very descriptive! To conclude your writing piece you will need a conclusion, it ties all up and lets your readers know that that is that. "Now that you have learn how to write a proficient paragraph.... You will now write one and it's due at the end of the class!"

Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Friend Prompt

Providing fun;causing amusement or laughter;amusing;comical. I'd say that the #1 word that describes me as a friend is funny! Making my friends laugh by saying and doing dumb things is what I like to do, it makes people feel good to be around me. One of the reason I'm funny is because I am outgoing on everything I do. I like to do imitations of people I hate, act out of my way, this makes my friends laugh and it makes people feel comfortable to be around me. A friend who is loud, outgoing, yup that's me! What people have to say about me doesn't bother me at all. As a person i'm not scared to do things, I just go at it and don't twice about doing it. When I am with my friends the dumb exciting girl comes out of me and takes over my body. I would just hate life if we couldn't hear the words of laughter "ha,ha,ha,ha,ha!" Remember,"There is nothing more beautiful then your laughter, except your laugh it made me thank a special friend."